Review of Tremper Longman III, Ecclesiastes (NICOT, 2nd ed.)

It is a genuine privilege to revisit Tremper Longman III’s Ecclesiastes in its second edition within the New International Commentary on the Old Testament series. For decades, NICOT has represented one of the finest examples of evangelical scholarship—philologically rigorous, critically engaged, and canonically attentive. Under the editorial oversight of Bill T. Arnold, the series continues to maintain a delicate but necessary balance between confessional commitments and critical inquiry. Eerdmans has likewise served both academy and Church by publishing works that resist reductionism while encouraging theological depth. For many scholars and pastors alike, NICOT volumes have functioned not merely as reference works but as intellectual companions in the discipline of careful reading.

Longman’s central thesis remains consistent with his first edition: Qohelet is presented as a largely negative voice whose skeptical perspective is ultimately corrected by the orthodox affirmation of the epilogue (12:9–14). The second edition refines this argument through clearer engagement with intervening scholarship and a more textured treatment of rhetorical strategy. The interpretive crux remains the function of the epilogue—whether it serves as corrective, canonical framing, or integrative conclusion.

Longman argues that the epilogue represents an authoritative theological evaluation of Qohelet’s discourse, redirecting the reader toward covenantal fidelity and “fear of God.”¹ This position has long distinguished him from interpreters who see the epilogue as harmonizing rather than correcting Qohelet’s voice.

Michael V. Fox, for example, resists the notion that Qohelet’s speech is fundamentally heterodox. Fox argues that the book presents a coherent philosophical position in which “absurdity” (hebel) reflects the structural incongruity between deed and consequence in human experience.² For Fox, the epilogue does not overturn Qohelet but rather affirms his epistemological realism within Israel’s faith. Similarly, C. L. Seow reads Ecclesiastes as “orthodox skepticism”—a faithful wrestling within covenantal parameters rather than a voice in need of correction.³

Longman’s reading is more sharply dialectical. He contends that Qohelet’s pessimistic conclusions, particularly regarding divine justice and retribution, must be evaluated through the theological lens supplied at the book’s conclusion.⁴ This interpretation has the virtue of canonical coherence and pastoral clarity. Yet some scholars may question whether it underestimates the literary unity of Qohelet’s voice. As Craig Bartholomew notes, the tension within Ecclesiastes may function pedagogically rather than polemically, inviting readers into wisdom through unresolved dissonance.⁵

The question, then, is not merely theological but literary: Does the narrator present Qohelet as a foil or as a faithful—if probing—sage? Longman’s case is well-argued, but the alternative integrative reading remains a significant conversation partner.

Longman’s treatment of hebel as “enigmatic” rather than simply “vanity” or “meaninglessness” remains one of the commentary’s strengths. He resists existentialist reductions that treat Qohelet as proto-nihilist and instead situates hebel within the epistemological limitations of human creatures before a sovereign God.⁶

Yet here again interpretive diversity emerges. Fox famously rendered hebel as “absurd,” emphasizing structural injustice and incongruity.⁷ Seow prefers “ephemeral,” highlighting transience more than philosophical frustration.⁸ Each semantic proposal carries theological freight. Longman’s “enigmatic” foregrounds mystery and divine inscrutability, subtly reinforcing his canonical-theological reading.

One might ask whether Longman’s theological commitments predispose him toward a less radical construal of Qohelet’s critique. Does the interpretive category of “enigma” sufficiently capture the existential sharpness of passages like 4:1–3 or 9:2–3? While Longman does not blunt these texts, his framework arguably softens their destabilizing force by anticipating correction.

A notable strength of the second edition is Longman’s attentiveness to Ancient Near Eastern wisdom traditions. He situates Ecclesiastes alongside Mesopotamian and Egyptian reflections on injustice, divine silence, and human limitation. This comparative work prevents anachronistic readings and reinforces the text’s participation in a broader wisdom discourse.⁹

Yet Longman carefully maintains Israel’s theological distinctiveness. Unlike ANE laments that drift toward resignation or polytheistic fatalism, Ecclesiastes retains covenantal monotheism as its horizon. Here Longman aligns with scholars who emphasize continuity without collapsing distinctiveness.

Some, however, may argue that Qohelet’s skepticism presses more sharply against traditional retribution theology than Longman allows. Fox and others contend that Ecclesiastes represents a substantive critique of classical wisdom theology (e.g., Prov 10–29), not merely a rhetorical testing of its boundaries.¹⁰ If so, the book may function less as correction of skepticism and more as internal reformulation of wisdom’s theological grammar.

Longman’s literary sensitivity deserves commendation. His attention to inclusio (1:2; 12:8), structural framing, and rhetorical escalation demonstrates methodological discipline. He reads the “carpe diem” texts not as escapism but as grateful reception of divine gift within epistemic limitation.¹¹ This is pastorally and theologically compelling.

Still, interpreters differ on whether these passages function as concessions to despair or as positive theological affirmations. Seow sees them as moments of genuine theological clarity within Qohelet’s discourse rather than temporary relief.¹² The distinction may seem subtle, but it shapes the book’s overall tone—oscillating resignation or grounded gratitude.

Longman’s second edition remains a mature and carefully reasoned contribution to Ecclesiastes studies. It models evangelical scholarship that is neither defensive nor dismissive of critical engagement. While alternative readings—particularly those of Fox, Seow, and Bartholomew—invite continued debate over the epilogue’s function and the coherence of Qohelet’s voice, Longman’s interpretive architecture is exegetically responsible and theologically attentive.

If the enduring value of a commentary lies not in eliminating interpretive tension but in clarifying its contours, then Longman has succeeded. His work remains indispensable for scholars and pastors who seek to wrestle faithfully with one of Scripture’s most unsettling and profound books.

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Notes

  1. Tremper Longman III, Ecclesiastes, NICOT, 2nd ed. (Grand Rapids: Eerdmans, 2018), esp. Introduction and comments on 12:9–14.
  2. Michael V. Fox, Qohelet and His Contradictions (Sheffield: Almond Press, 1989), 30–52.
  3. C. L. Seow, Ecclesiastes, AB 18C (New York: Doubleday, 1997), 39–52.
  4. Longman, Ecclesiastes, 2nd ed., discussion of epilogue.
  5. Craig G. Bartholomew, Ecclesiastes, Baker Commentary on the Old Testament Wisdom and Psalms (Grand Rapids: Baker Academic, 2009), 84–97.
  6. Longman, Ecclesiastes, discussion of hebel.
  7. Fox, Qohelet and His Contradictions, 27–31.
  8. Seow, Ecclesiastes, 101–104.
  9. Longman, Ecclesiastes, introduction on ANE parallels.
  10. Fox, A Time to Tear Down and a Time to Build Up (Grand Rapids: Eerdmans, 1999), 297–320.
  11. Longman, comments on 2:24–26; 3:12–13; 9:7–10.
  12. Seow, Ecclesiastes, 162–170.